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    April 11

    Adhuri Purnta

    Adhuri purnta

    Kal badalon ke pechey se

    ek adhura chand mujhey dekh hans pada.

    Paas ke chote tarey se bola –

    “Is ko dekho, jeene ki purnta ke pechey bawri ho rahi hai,

    yeh bhi nahi janti ki jo waqt

    purnta ke pechey gawa rahi hai

    wo waqt nahin , lamhon ka guncha hai

    jo uske dil se fisalta ja raha hai.”

     

    Tarey ne nadani se pucha –

    “To kya fisalne wale ko

    hath badha kar pakadna nahin chahiye?”

     

    chand ne tarey ko dekha

    ek lambi sans  li,

    aur pitritw ke andaz se kaha –

    “Jab koi tara tut kar girta hai to kya karte ho?”

     

     Tara bola – “kuch nahin”.

    Aur asmanjas mein chand ko dekhne laga.

     

    Chand khilkhila kar hans pada. 

    Use samjhate huye bola -

    “ Log to us tut te tare ko girta dekh kar bhi

    us par apney sapno ka bojha ladh dete hain.”

     

    Phir jaise khud se bolbe laga –

    “poornima aur purnta to matr ek raat

    ke liye chu jati hai .

    us tak pahuchney

    aur phir se kho kar paney mein hi  chirantan hai.Adhure pan ke har raat ka maja to koi mujh se puchey.”

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      nice nice . .  
     nice poem ..  simple and sweet ..
     tumi bhalo bhachi ??
     lol . 
     so how r U  bristi ??? sup ??
     
    May 26
    Kritiwrote:
    Hey ...sorry for dropping by so late but first off, I'd like to state that I think urs was one of the comments that not only touched me the most but also made a lot of sense! and you're welcome to drop by anytime, even when you dont sniff any woes anywhere :))
     
    Am not so good at judging poetry but by the looks of it, this one's great!
    Take care
    Kriti
    Apr. 30
    Picture of Anonymous
    Apr. 13
    Smitawrote:
    Welcome back Di! Hope this time u r here to stay....was really missing ur posts
     
    Beautifully written as always.... love the new look....
     
    gar adhure na huye kabhi to kya purnata ka marm samajh payenge?
     
    Bhalo theko...
     
    Lots of love,
    Smita
    Apr. 12
    Shrutiwrote:
    Wow!!! lovely poem...

    Apr. 12
    Horuswrote:
    hasne ki wajah to kai the
    wajah ka khoj hi to kahin wajah na tha?
    Apr. 11

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