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November 22

5 sentences later, I look up

to infer the vacuum ,

every 5 sentences later ,

I realize the vacuum is absolute truth.

Every 5 sentences the vaccum reminds

I will stay.

Every 5 sentences

I try to feel - with and within.

Every five sentences later

The presence of deaf ears

Five sentences later

Silence seems golden and

walls welcome back to the grave.

12:34:02 PM | Blog it | silent scream

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	Dheerawrote: I liked the fact that vacuum was the absolute truth. it was almost like bringin me to reality. Thanks. loved it Dheera May 1
	icy volcanowrote: i read ur comment somehwhere & thought monsoon was back!! so thought of welcoming u! hey but where are u yet? nidhi Apr. 11
	icy volcanowrote: i read ur comment somehwhere & thought monsoon was back!! so thought of welcoming u! hey but where are u yet? nidhi Apr. 11
	icy volcanowrote: i read ur comment somehwhere & thought monsoon was back!! so thought of welcoming u! hey but where are u yet? nidhi Apr. 11
	icy volcanowrote: i read ur comment somehwhere & thought monsoon was back!! so thought of welcoming u! hey but where are u yet? nidhi Apr. 11
	icy volcanowrote: i read ur comment somehwhere & thought monsoon was back!! so thought of welcoming u! hey but where are u yet? nidhi Apr. 11
	icy volcanowrote: i read ur comment somehwhere & thought monsoon was back!! so thought of welcoming u! hey but where are u yet? nidhi Apr. 11
	Horuswrote: paltano theme ta ebar visible... Apr. 11
	Horuswrote: Happy Birthday!! I hope its now gets a resurrection!! Mar. 20
	Çé®εв®åĻ®ùşţwrote: hey!terribly sorry for the reaaalllly really late reply.and apologies for my pic.lol.what i would do to get eyes like that.ofcourse i'd prolly have to live in a cave or a circus or something.hehe. anyways,have i told you how much i love your writing?it's so different.unique and half the time my grey matter isn't adequate to interpret the products of your pen.anways,do keep in touch. take care. Feb. 24
	Fu Hsingwrote: words? letters? emotions? Feb. 24
	SAURABH DHALLwrote: update...... Jan. 30
	Arun Sharmawrote: OH YES, WISH YOU AND YOUR LOVED ONES A GREAT AND INTERESTING 2007. (*) Jan. 9
	Arun Sharmawrote: Hi Orphan. It has been a real long time. I wonder if you get to know that I have beenin touch with writing; but badly enough not with my blogger friends. I read your last 2 entries. Both were very nice, espeacially previous one 'monsoon to winter'. I wonder who are being said 'good bye'. Or it is only your poetic self. Actually I am too taking more care of my other blog on 'blog-city'. It has the same text; but I am getting a lot of hits there. Take care. Arun Jan. 9
	Smitawrote: Hey Di! Time for some more sentences.... Love, Smita Jan. 4
	zac zacwrote: Happy newyear!!! Dec. 31
	zac zacwrote: welcome back! Belated Merry xmas and a Happy new year in advance, havent been around much myself....me on holidays again Dec. 27
	Abhimanyu Dasguptawrote: hey so good to hear you back, 5 sentences later! Ive been very busy and have hardly blogged. But now with the winter vacations here, I am back in writing action. Missed this world so much. where are you? how are you? do email! Love and wishes for the season and a fortune filled New Year! Abhi Dec. 26
	Kritiwrote: i think u share my fascination for oblivion...sometimes i wish i cd just drown into the lethe Dec. 19
	SAURABH DHALLwrote: kya haal hai bey..howj u...hows life....chalo ittey din baad hi sahi update to kiya...chaahe mere samajh mein ni aya... Dec. 10

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